Settle Down in There!
My sincere wishes that the holiday(s) have been happy ones for everyone who reads this. Bride and brood are off in Fresno visiting family; the decision was made that I should remain homebound for two good reasons, the first being that, with school having been closed the previous week, I got almost no work done with the kids around; and second, with the weather, there were concerns for the condition of the house. Turns out the second one was pretty accurate – I woke up the day after their departure to find water leaking through the ceiling into the ground-floor bathroom. There was a leak coming in from my son’s room directly above. Got it managed, but that was the better part of a day shot, and now the requisite concerns about water damage arise.
Have been trying to get work done. Not nearly as productive as I’ve wished to be. Wrote 12 pages of script that I’m pretty certain will have to be junked wholesale. Working on the rewrite of a long-form work, and that’s giving me a minor headache, as well. Jen and the kids return tomorrow, so the window for being exceptionally productive is rapidly closing, and that’s its own frustration. As I was getting ready for bed last night, I realized that the sheer number of characters currently vying for attention in my head right now is potentially out of control.
So I thought I’d make a list. Then I thought I’d share it.
At the moment, there are:
- A young twenty-something sleight of hand expert trying to figure out what to do with her life and her skills.
- Her sixty-something mentor wondering if his life has been a failure.
- A man and a woman working together on a protracted espionage assignment who have no idea the depth and breadth of the conspiracy they’re up against.
- A middle-aged Federal Marshal dealing with grief and loss on multiple levels.
- A recently-divorced FBI Agent who has no idea how his life is about to change.
- A man who honestly believes he’s helping the woman he loves.
- A woman who’s self-loathing is matched only by her skill at her job and her love for her child.
- A man who believes the mission comes first, and as a result, has seen his career suffer for it.
- A career soldier wondering how he could have been so wrong.
- A soldier who, bound by her honor, was denied the opportunity to serve, now struggling to find an alternate way to fight the same war.
- That soldier’s enemy.
- That soldier’s sibling.
- That soldier’s True Love.
- A genetically grown slave who killed in self-defense, and now must be put down.
- A very confused, and confusing, private investigator.
- A mentally retarded young man who is pretty much the only person around him who has the first idea what’s really going on.
- The two children of a very dangerous crime boss, each vying to take over the family business.
- The crime boss.
- The crime boss’s right-hand man, who’s in love with one of his boss’s two children.
- A four year-old who never knew her father and is beginning to think her nanny is her mother.
- A college student trying to figure out what to do with her life.
- A former Special Forces soldier trying to stop a nefarious plot in a magical kindgdom.
- An amnesiac thief who has made a deal with the devil for protection.
- A Very Bad Girl.
- A brilliant scientist and philosopher mourning the death of his son.
There are more. Those are just the ones shouting the loudest.
fullburl pointed me to Rachel Maddow’s incredibly kind comments about Queen & Country. May be the kindest, nicest, most flattering thing I’ve ever read about my work, all the more so as it comes from a woman who’s work I hold in such high regard.

